This photo was taken by a friend, but i can't be really sure who was. The Chío? The Ferrada? THE MARTIN?? Maybe was the Consuelo. Is not the photographer, but the fact that we all were in that plaza, the important thing in the image. We were in the Plaza Libertad de Expresión, dancing and drinking vodka before we went to the Blondie to vacilar. The guy in the left is Cachito, my best friend, and the handsome one in the right is me.
This happened in march, but I haven't see the photo until two weeks ago. I won't say "the ecletic aesthetic and the soft saturation of the colors make the spectator connect with the essence of dance", no, but I think is a great moment. Cachito ussualy refuse to dance, but that night in Blondie was the first time he really enjoyed the dance. He was the type "i don't like dancing ugh that's awkard", till that night happilly.
I think this story is a story of man it was drank and hide. That's the only thing I say xD
ResponderEliminarWhile I was reading, I thought in the George Michael song "Freedom" (https://youtu.be/diYAc7gB-0A).
ResponderEliminarThis photo it's a bit mystic, but show us a good moment that you were having with your friends and that's so good!
Greetings!
-Andru
Even though the overall message of the text is clear, there are parts which are not comprehensible, check below:
ResponderEliminarCorrections:
"The Chío? The Ferrada? THE MARTIN?? Maybe was the Consuelo. " I don't understand the uses of articles.
to vacilar.= what do you mean?
but I haven't see the photo until two weeks ago= incoherent due to tenses
Cachito ussualy refuse to dance= when has cachito danced?
T: 3, L:1,5, G: 1= 5.5 PTS
GRADE: 4.5